英语写作中3句病句解析，看完不会再改错了
来源：新东方商务英语培训 时间：2015/11/21 15:30:03 作者：新东方商务英语
<p> <span style="font-family:SimSun;font-size:14px;color:#000000;line-height:2;"> 在商务英语写作中，人们往往会遇到这样那样的问题。下面由<a href="http://becwxi.soxsok.com/" target="_blank"><strong><span style="color:#E53333;">新东方商务英语培训</span></strong></a>小编为大家介绍商务英语写作中经常遇到的3中病句解析，相信大家看完之后在自己以后的写作中能够引以为戒：</span> </p> <p> <span style="font-family:SimSun;font-size:14px;color:#000000;line-height:2;"></span> </p> <p> <span style="font-family:SimSun;font-size:14px;color:#000000;line-height:2;"> 1. I’ll make a bath for you.(x)</span> </p> <p> <br /> </p> <p> <span style="font-family:SimSun;font-size:14px;color:#000000;line-height:2;"> I'll run a bath for you. (√)</span> </p> <p> <br /> </p> <p> <span style="font-family:SimSun;font-size:14px;color:#000000;line-height:2;"> 英文中没有 make a bath的说法。“放洗澡水”是run a bath。洗澡是take a bath (美式用法)或have a bath (英式用法)。另外，如要讲“你的洗澡水放好了”可说Your bath is ready。</span> </p> <p> <br /> </p> <p> <span style="font-family:SimSun;font-size:14px;color:#000000;line-height:2;"> 2. The battery is useless. You need to recharge it. (x)</span> </p> <p> <br /> </p> <p> <span style="font-family:SimSun;font-size:14px;color:#000000;line-height:2;"> The battery is dead. You need to recharge it. (√)</span> </p> <p> <br /> </p> <p> <span style="font-family:SimSun;font-size:14px;color:#000000;line-height:2;"> The battery is useless是说“这个电池不能再使用”，因此充电也无济于事，所以该接着说You need to change it.(你需要更换电池了。)至于电池“没电”.正确的用词是dead(美式用法)或flat(英式用法)。</span> </p> <p> <br /> </p> <p> <span style="font-family:SimSun;font-size:14px;color:#000000;line-height:2;"> 3. I started to be angry when I sensed that she would stand me up.(x)</span> </p> <p> <br /> </p> <p> <span style="font-family:SimSun;font-size:14px;color:#000000;line-height:2;"> I started to get angry when I sensed that she would stand me up. (√)</span> </p> <p> <br /> </p> <p> <span style="font-family:SimSun;font-size:14px;color:#000000;line-height:2;"> be angry是生气的“完成”状态，如:Mary was angry when I came in.(当我进门时，玛丽早就在生气。)get / become / grow angry则表由“未完成”进入“完成”的动作，如:Mary got angry when I came in.(当我进门时，玛丽就生气了。)这个“气”摆明是冲着“我”来的。</span> </p> <p> <br /> </p> <p> <span style="font-family:SimSun;font-size:14px;color:#000000;line-height:2;"> 学更多地道英语关注<a href="http://becwxi.soxsok.com/" target="_blank"><strong><span style="color:#E53333;">新东方商务英语培训</span></strong></a></span> </p> <p> <br /> </p> <p> <span style="font-family:SimSun;font-size:14px;color:#000000;line-height:2;"> 每日分享英语心情美文，美剧美语思维学习，地道英语口语，英语歌训练语音语调，关注<a href="http://becwxi.soxsok.com/" target="_blank"><strong><span style="color:#E53333;">新东方商务英语培训</span></strong></a>。</span> </p>